Once we had edited our first and second draft we
decided to show the class for feedback.
Improvements to be made:
- Include more head shots of the singer to show star image
- Improve on lip syncing timings
- Refilm boat scene without the girl
- Change colour of paper boats to match prop research
- Cut photograph scene out
- Cut clothes scene out
- Dog is not irrelevant to the storyline
- Too many shots of the boy
- Light exposure is too high in some shots
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